Review: 'Staying Still' by Hieu Minh Nguyen
The Morning After · Issue 1
Notes taken the morning after a first date with Staying Still by Hieu Minh Nguyen.
FIRST READ
shy but clearly hiding something / somehow already mid-conversation
hunger meets its reflection, returning the dulled animal to us: the one drawn to the scent of all that is trivial, and therefore toothsome
TABLE TALK
startling / self-composed / alluringly distant
brought into focus through outlawed language (“beautiful”), there’s the urge to align the world’s edges with the body’s flourish
tonally, the moves are so smooth they’re almost startling—so startling they arouse a sense of dazed familiarity
particularly in Intimacy, which stabs its own concept with lulling strokes
the kind of comedy that can only be called human, though not anything that can be called comedy in return
PACE
escalating through osmosis
scene upon scene, with the body as the curtain, drawing the eye, the finger, the mouth parting to let the next act through
occasionally, but very rarely, memory’s bite sinks too deeply into the present, pulling language back into the density of the scene and away from poetry’s elevation
it’s then that a patchwork of whetted points is needed to make up a sensation
TOUCH
insistent / disorienting / tender
an estrangement from the world, but still bound to it as if incapable of leaving intimacy’s periphery
weighed down by an almost romantic compulsion
the world puts its mouth on us, sees us…though not as we are
a lithe body of lyrical and narrative writing, pressed close in the dark
snippets of a life lived from the outside, with each tissue of unnerved text slowly worked back into it
a dissociative relationship with all that moves in and out—and around—a body propelled by the desire to desire life
the stillness of that hunger is self-immolating
wrestles with a certain hopefulness that he’ll not only be found by the world in that stillness, but claimed by it
felt most keenly when his thumb sneaks into the frame as he photographs posing strangers, hoping for his presence to be tenderized as pixelated flesh
a form of restlessness muffled by its own temperament
LATER THAT NIGHT
earned / inevitable in hindsight
everything slips into place: we find ourselves at the point where a lost lover’s absence is touched to be felt, with hands placed all over a shadow that sidesteps its own stillness
THE SLIP
a growing sense of unease with all that the speaker is capable of shedding about himself, all that he is capable of turning around to face
CAUGHT THE EYE
children kicking a used condom back and forth while screaming “jellyfish!”
WEATHERED MOOD
muted / restrained / tense
a life devoured by the lyricism of vacated pain
AFTERTASTE
clarified / hollowed, then refilled
like holding a scalded hand in the path of rushing water: a shocking reminder that there’s another moment past the flaring of nerves, another sensation beyond the cascading moment
An advance copy was provided by Tin House, an imprint of Zando.
THE NIGHT’S TURN
♜♝♝♜♛
GENRES
Poetry | LGBTQ+
PUBLICATION DATE
September 1, 2026



